Pool pinic party

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Title  Pool Picnic party.

Where?Ymca panmure pools

When?Wednesday 18th february 2015.

Who?The whole school family and friends.

What?Have fun.

Why?Fun day out to the pools.

I felt slippery as I was going down the slide.When I was going down it looked pitch black.

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Why did we go?Tamaki primary school  went on a bus to go and have some fun at the pools in panmure.As  it was a picnic day When I went I was excited and amazed to go with the whole school.

I could smell chlorine I could hear the water splashing and people screaming.

ice blocks and sausage sizzles.Having ice blocks and sausages were awesome because it was hot and we needed  something to make us cool.

I could taste the water as I was going down.And when I was going down my arms bangded on the inside of the pool..

Student councils helping out with stepping in like leaders.Having water activities was very  excited and  playful.As I was swimming I really did have a good time going with my class room and mates at the pools.

I  saw people going down the slide and doing funny facials.

HYDROSLIDE.Doing the  was awesome because it was my second time going on it.Challenging myself for the diving board was really scary because when you're down its short so when you are on top of it its like a fall.

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When we went back to school I  enjoyed my time going to the picnic pool party. It was the first school trip I went on and I loved it so much that things like these we should go on more  often.

Name:Desire sanisitou

Title:pool picnic party

Date:Thursday 19th february 2015

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